I've been advised that proposed section 29.11 has already been determined to be inadmissible, and based upon the linkage you just made as well as the comment made by Mr. Alexander that NDP-3, the amendment to clause 6, section 29.101, of the National Defence Act is also outside of the scope of the bill since the Chief of the Defence Staff is the final authority for all grievances and not only some of them.
You can't replace the Chief of the Defence Staff with the grievances committee since that would be contradictory to the bill, so I'm ruling it inadmissible.