The second part says:
Whereas the Government of Canada is committed to providing Canadians with the opportunity and means to participate in impact, regional, and strategic assessments, and with full and timely access to
Then it goes into the information.
Those are the two changes to that: adding in “value” of public participation; taking out the specific reference just to the planning stage, and saying that it would be to all stages of impact, regional, and strategic assessments; and that it would provide the opportunity and means to participate in the impact, regional, and strategic assessments and with the full and timely access to information that they need.