Your recommendation reads as follows:
IMS's recommendation for a technical amendment to PIPEDA consists of two parts: (1) THAT the definition of “personal information” as found in section 2 paragraph 1 of the act be amended to read as follows: “personal information” means information about an identifiable individual, but does not include the name, title or business address or telephone number of an employee of an organization, or work- product information. AND (2) THAT a definition of “work-product information” to read as follows be added to section 2(1): “work-product information” means information prepared, compiled or disclosed by an individual or group as part of the individual or group's responsibilities related to their profession, employment or business. It does not include: (i) personal information about an identifiable individual who did not prepare, compile or disclose the information; or (ii) information collected, used or disclosed for the purposes of workplace surveillance.
Those are your two suggestions. Is that correct?