It may be that there'll be some need for adjustment to the motion. I apologize, I haven't had the time obviously to speak to the clerk and make sure that it follows all the procedures, so I do hope you'll be indulgent in making suggestions that will make it in order, if there is some technical reason why it's not. But certainly it's in the spirit of the initial goal.
What I propose to do is on line 5--these aren't numbered--which begins “the document” in English, insert the following after the word “appear”:
in the following order: (1) the Information Commissioner and such other witnesses as are necessary to establish which sections of the Access to Information Act may have been violated;” (2) Jeff Esau and Paul Koring of The Globe and Mail; (3) Professor Amir Attaran; (4) Jocelyne Sabourin, Department of Foreign Affairs; and (5) such other witnesses as the committee, acting as a whole and in camera, decides to call;
I apologize. I haven't had a chance to write this down. I was actually working on it, but my number came up. I guess you'd have to then, after the bullets, start again where it says “and further”. That would continue on. I'm not suggesting that be taken out, but obviously the parts that refer to individuals and to today's date would actually be removed.