Once again, I think we can always rely on Mr. Housefather to get to the heart of the matter. I fully agree that we don't need the superfluous language in the preamble.
I note that “Taylor Swift” is still in the main body of the resolution, so there is some question about tickets for other programs, other shows, other sports events and so on. I may have something to say about that when we're discussing the main motion.
On the amendment itself, I'm certainly in agreement.