Sir, I do believe the word “either” might need to come out as well in order to make it make sense.
If you'll just allow me, I'll read from “Friday, September 22”: “Friday, September 22, and that proper vetting was not done; that the chair of OGGO write to PROC to suggest that they create a subcommittee”, and it goes on from there with the language that has already been agreed to by the committee. It would strike “either” and then strike “or this individual's military record was ignored”, and it would be closeted by a semicolon.