I have bad news.
Bill S-228 would come into force two years after royal assent. The amendment tries to replace the timeline with December 31, 2024.
As the House of Commons Procedure and Practice says, in the third edition on page 774:
...an amendment to delay the coming into force is admissible as long as the delay is considered to be reasonable and not seen as an attempt to thwart the implementation of the provisions of the bill.
In the opinion of the chair—and I had a little help—the proposal would drastically increase the time elapsed before the bill would come into force. The amendment is therefore inadmissible.
Thank you very much.