My remarks are on the language used in the preamble, but it’s also part of the rest of the bill.
There is indeed a difference between the words “collectivity” and “community”. In the French version, the preferred term should be “community”. Obviously, I will not go out on a limb to say what would be the better term in English. However, in the French version of the bill, it would be preferable to write the word “community” each time.