We'll reword it. I think there's consensus.
For the sake of expediency and so that we can get out of here—because there are people out in the corridor—I think we can rework the wording to something that would accommodate that.
Perhaps as a final comment, this particular item might not be a bad idea to mention at some point, because this different version of events is referenced three times. So within one of those contexts it should be referenced.