I would agree; I don't have much to add to the analysis of Professor Carvin. To be frank, I focused more on SCISA, because it's the weakest part. I have noted, of course, the provision you are referring to, and I think it is an improvement inf terms of striking the right balance between freedom of speech, privacy, and ensuring the security of Canadians.
On December 7th, 2017. See this statement in context.