Sure.
What I'll focus on instead are my recommendations. They are as follows:
Ensure any limitation of human rights conforms with Canada's national and international obligations. Any encroachment on human rights must be necessary, proportionate, reasonable, and justifiable in a free and democratic society.
The government must ensure any collection of personal data is directly linked to protecting public safety and national security, rather than being tangentially connected to the duties and functions of CSIS or any other agency.
Legislation should be introduced to protect the Canadian populace from third party commodification of personal data through payment or subscription.
The national security and intelligence review agency should be provided with the authority to render binding decisions.
The role of the intelligence commissioner should be elevated from part-time to full-time status to reflect the breadth of the portfolio.