Yes.
The proposed language, which I'll propose in a minute, would still include a general prohibition on the disclosure of personal information about Canadians and persons in Canada, but it would add an exception to ensure that CSIS could disclose an individual's personal information to that individual as part of a disclosure to build resiliency against threats.
In terms of the actual edit to the language itself, in proposed paragraph 2.1(b), after the comma at the end of the last sentence, I would change it to “other than personal information of the individual to whom the information is disclosed.” In proposed paragraph 2.1(c), I would change it, after the sentence that ends with “entity”, by adding “other than the name of the corporation or entity to which the information is disclosed.”