I really like the way this is presented. In my opinion, the word “dramatic” is problematic, because all women are aware of the consequences. So, I would remove the word “dramatic”, so that people would be encouraged to look at all the aspects of this issue, and not only those that are dramatic. There are also physical and psychological aspects to this, in addition to the general consequences. I am just imagining showing this to my daughters. I am not sure they would find the word “dramatic”… We know what the consequences are, so I would prefer to say “all the consequences”.
Do you understand what I mean?