I'm very grateful that our previous changes were all incorporated, but in reading it again I have three suggestions.
One is that we should say who the letter is to, because it doesn't. I think we're directing it to the Minister of Justice, but it should say that at the top of the page.
I'd also suggest in the second full paragraph that instead of “the Committee would like to invite the Minister”, we change it to, “the Committee encourages the Minister”. We want to be, I think, a bit more active about this.
At the very end, partly because what we're asking the minister to do is fan this out to her provincial counterparts, I'd like to see a very final sentence saying, “Will you please let us know if you do relay this to your provincial and territorial counterparts”, so that we have some kind of feedback about whether the message was delivered or received.