I've scanned these, and the only difference I can see with the NDP-3.3 is in the proposed addition of items 4.9(c.1)(i)(A) and 4.9(c.1)(i)(B), including the addition of the words “personally responsible” and “personally accountable”. In subparagraph (ii), after the words “the highest level of safety”, Mr. Julian has added “determined by the Minister”. Then there's subparagraph (v).
I'm comfortable with Mr. Volpe's recommendation.