Maybe, and that's fine.
I think this is important enough. I agree with the sentiments of Betty and Peter and the others--and our witnesses--that it needs to be simple and it needs to be respectful of veterans. At the same time, especially if it's short, we need to read it word for word. I'm sure we can struggle through this meeting, but is there a way we can get a copy of this without the big “Draft” written through it?
Again, I would like to know, these deletions in the formatting, which precedes which? I can't make out which comes first and which comes second.