That's exactly my notion here, that with some good editing.... For example, the two lines, “Veterans have the right to...recognition of the importance of family and community in your well-being” and the next line, “Veterans have the right to...be included in discussions that affect your health and well-being”, could be edited to one line: “Veterans have the right to know their well-being is the number one concern of Veterans Affairs”.
On March 27th, 2007. See this statement in context.