So I just wanted to say that it is important to define democracy, because article 25 of the International Covenant on Civil and Political Rights reads as follows:
Every citizen shall have the right and the opportunity, without any of the distinctions mentioned in article 2 and without unreasonable restrictions: (a) To take part in the conduct of public affairs, directly or through freely chosen representatives; (b) To vote and to be elected at genuine periodic elections which shall be by universal and equal suffrage and shall be held by secret ballot, guaranteeing the free expression of the will of electors; (c) To have access, on general terms of equality, to public service in his country.
So it would be extremely beneficial to add something about democracy to the bill.