The motion you're putting on the floor is different from the original motion, in that you're using the term “immediately”, not to mention a few other words. My caution would be that I'm not happy with anything that suggests we'll limit debate. I don't want to limit debate, so either remove the term “immediately” and go back to the original motion...otherwise I'm concerned you're limiting debate. We're entering another motion before the first motion, which you ruled me to deal with.
Do you understand what I'm trying to say? It's a matter of process. We're back to the first motion.