I think with paragraph 28 I would propose an amendment to make the paragraph reflect more accurately the view of the committee at the time. My amendment would be to the second sentence in paragraph 28:
There were also comments, including that members found it difficult to understand why the FINA deadline was not respected, and why it took the government four months to provide FINA and Parliament with the information that it had requested.
I would propose replacing “members” with “the committee”, because I think the majority of the members found it difficult to understand why the FINA deadline was not respected; as such, the majority of members would constitute “the committee”.
Further, the sentence beginning--