I would highlight that the Nunn commission talks about short- and long-term protection. I think that's important, if it is added. Also, there were two recommendations in the Nunn commission report, which are not considered at all, that relate to that. I think they're very important, because they talk about other duty bearers.
I think that adding it as one, but reflecting the whole Nunn commission view, could be tenable.
I'm most concerned about the rewriting of how we understand accountability and prevention. The rewrites are unacceptable.