I've seen those proposals, but I haven't had time to really examine them in depth. I also saw the proposed amendments of the Liberal Party and the Bloc Quebecois.
It seems to me that these amendments would improve the bill, but I don't think they would improve the bill to the extent that it would meet the standards set out in a judgment by the Supreme Court. I think it would make for a better bill, but I still don't think it would meet the standards of the judgment.