I've seen Lorne and Craig's piece, and I would concur with all of what they have said, but I have a number of additional.... I would add the Suresh exception and a number of other things. I don't want to go through the whole list here.
As has been cautioned in our submission, because of the short timeframe, we haven't given you everything. What this really needs is a proper timeframe to sit down and work with this. There wasn't really much consultation with lawyers or members in the community that are affected by this legislation. We saw it; I drafted this up on the weekend, and I came.
I would take Craig and Lorne's changes, and I would add the Suresh exception and a number of others, but certainly I would endorse those.