I fully agree with the intent behind this. It's just a matter of trying to make it easier to read.
The amendment, as it's currently worded, would add proposed paragraph 21.1(1.1)(f) in there. It didn't seem to read well, so my suggestion, and I can hand this to the legislative clerk to show where I popped in the wording, is that at proposed paragraph 21.1(1.1)(f) on page 110, which currently reads, “interfering with the movement of any person” we would add “, excluding the detention of an individual; and”. It's the same wording. It's just placed differently within the paragraph to make it clearer.