You would certainly take out clauses 14 and 16. Paragraph 8(b) doesn't go to access to information; it's about a veto on actual reviews, so close consideration should be given as to whether there should be a veto. Clauses 14 and 16 would be replaced with language you could take right out of the CSIS Act that relates to SIRC. The SIRC language guards access to information. It also contains some of the powers that Mr. Atkey was discussing in terms of capacity to compel information. The limit on SIRC access to information is confined strictly to cabinet confidences.
The language is already drafted and it would be, to a certain extent, a matter of carbon copying.