Let me begin by apologizing for getting the time confused. I was labouring under eastern time, and I should have known better.
I will be very brief. The only comment of consequence is with respect to subclause 13(2), where the “information” includes information that penetrates the solicitor-client confidentiality. I don't think that would pass charter scrutiny. I don't think you can pierce the solicitor-client privilege. Perhaps you might consider getting legal advice on that.
The only other comment that I would make is with respect to subclause 21(2), on reporting directly to the Prime Minister. That seemed to be a little too narrow, but as I read further on I think you have provided for eventually getting the report to Parliament.
That's the total of my observations.