Yes, I absolutely agree that the way part 2 is currently drafted is incompatible with the fundamental human right to privacy. It is why our primary recommendation is that it be scrapped entirely.
If it is not feasible to do so, we think that certain targeted changes should be the absolute foundation for any legislation that looks like part 2. Even those will not address all of our concerns and will in fact continue to leave various executive actions that could harm the privacy and security of everyday Canadians.