At the risk of repeating myself, I will say that we believe it is very challenging to see how proposed part 2 could be amended in a way that would not pose a serious threat to Signal.
If it is politically unfeasible for proposed part 2 to be removed, then we would request two crucial changes. The first is that an explicit amendment be introduced that does not allow the government to weaken encryption in any product, either directly under the provisions of the law or via indirect provisions, such as technical capability notices or production orders.
The second—