I would just suggest to Mr. Falk that given that the language that remains after BQ-4 uses the term “grievous and irremediable”, and that it has previously been defined in proposed subsection 241.2(2), it actually is consistent as a result.
Evidence of meeting #16 for Justice and Human Rights in the 42nd Parliament, 1st Session. (The original version is on Parliament’s site, as are the minutes.) The winning word was amendment.
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